Entry 10
Date: 22 February 2018
Section: Reflecting
ATLs: Thinking Critically, Communication
Content:
I emailed Ms. Hoping to get Feedback and she answered three weeks later. Here is her email.
Her feedback was useful but a bit last minute. I managed to arrange the sound of the guitar and to make the harmonies louder. I disagree with the need of a guitar riff because I need my song to be easy to understand. Adding a riff can be a good melody remembered by my audience easily but also considered as a complicated part of the song. I need my song to have an easy message and to touch people without the need of riffs. The second screenshot shows my answer to the comment about voiding the word “slut”. I totally disagree and believe that this word emphasizes the range these situations can take.
Section: Reflecting
ATLs: Thinking Critically, Communication
- Practise observing carefully in order to recognise problems
- Give and receive meaningful feedback
Content:
I emailed Ms. Hoping to get Feedback and she answered three weeks later. Here is her email.
Her feedback was useful but a bit last minute. I managed to arrange the sound of the guitar and to make the harmonies louder. I disagree with the need of a guitar riff because I need my song to be easy to understand. Adding a riff can be a good melody remembered by my audience easily but also considered as a complicated part of the song. I need my song to have an easy message and to touch people without the need of riffs. The second screenshot shows my answer to the comment about voiding the word “slut”. I totally disagree and believe that this word emphasizes the range these situations can take.
Lara gave me feedback. She gave me a grade of 18/18. She said she was impressed my independence and the hard work I put in. She said the pre chorus was really catchy and she really enjoys the song. In terms of skills, she encourages me to continue composing songs because she thinks I have the capacity. She also says I can improve this song by adding a bass guitar later on, but that she understand I didn’t due to the amount of time.